

Disclaimer #1- This series is about a guy that summons a harem of hot succubus women and then battles demon lords to save the world.Disclaimer #2- It's way raunchier than my other novels. You'll probably love it. Review: Fun, Sexy, and Funny! - This was the first novel by Eric Vall I have raid and I have to say based on this I am a fan! The MC is fun and not one of these wishy-washy types afraid to get it on with the hot ladies that appear in this sort of book. As a fan of harem and erotic novels, I hate those types. The girls are hot Cupi is a fit blonde, and Libidine is a huge breasted dark haired beauty. Bonus points for giant assets! The Magic System is cool as is his take on the world and Mythology. The interplay between the characters is fun and Lively. The MC's roomate often steals the show with a great one liner or gag. If I could change one thing it's that in the last half of the book there's really no sex. And that was a bummer. Still it was a fun ending, and I hope for many more books in this line. Review: Entertaining book, It could have been better with a little more polishing. 3,5 stars. - The book is fine, very entertaining and funny. The plot isnโt very original, but is fairly good. The magic system is very creative and well done. The characters are good, the MC and his buddy are very funny and well developed. But the women are one dimensional; they are there for the fanservice and the needed exposition. They arenโt very appealing characters. There is a trend in these books, one I donโt like, that the MC embraces his new life โand all its craziness- at ones, without any hesitation. I understand this kind of book doesnโt have much depth, but the way they act is weird, and the quickness to develop and use the magic is too much. A person has to train years of years to master something; it doesn't use his recently acquired powers with mastery in a few minutesโฆ and definitely not to defat a master daemon with thousands of years of experience. The last thing I want to address is the lazy blurb; I canโt understand what the author was thinking. Is he focusing on his established reader base? Because these crappy blurbs aren't the way to add new readers.
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D**T
Fun, Sexy, and Funny!
This was the first novel by Eric Vall I have raid and I have to say based on this I am a fan! The MC is fun and not one of these wishy-washy types afraid to get it on with the hot ladies that appear in this sort of book. As a fan of harem and erotic novels, I hate those types. The girls are hot Cupi is a fit blonde, and Libidine is a huge breasted dark haired beauty. Bonus points for giant assets! The Magic System is cool as is his take on the world and Mythology. The interplay between the characters is fun and Lively. The MC's roomate often steals the show with a great one liner or gag. If I could change one thing it's that in the last half of the book there's really no sex. And that was a bummer. Still it was a fun ending, and I hope for many more books in this line.
G**.
Entertaining book, It could have been better with a little more polishing. 3,5 stars.
The book is fine, very entertaining and funny. The plot isnโt very original, but is fairly good. The magic system is very creative and well done. The characters are good, the MC and his buddy are very funny and well developed. But the women are one dimensional; they are there for the fanservice and the needed exposition. They arenโt very appealing characters. There is a trend in these books, one I donโt like, that the MC embraces his new life โand all its craziness- at ones, without any hesitation. I understand this kind of book doesnโt have much depth, but the way they act is weird, and the quickness to develop and use the magic is too much. A person has to train years of years to master something; it doesn't use his recently acquired powers with mastery in a few minutesโฆ and definitely not to defat a master daemon with thousands of years of experience. The last thing I want to address is the lazy blurb; I canโt understand what the author was thinking. Is he focusing on his established reader base? Because these crappy blurbs aren't the way to add new readers.
J**N
GREAT!
Damn good story from start to finish! Even though this is the first book in the series the adventure was excellent I know there are 18 more books to go but this has endless possibilities!
T**N
The CW Presents: Super Succcubi Sex
This book is exactly what it looks like on the tin, nothing less yet nothing more. It's a sex filled origin story of a man named Jacob whose best friend and roommate Todd buys a book off the internet that allows them to summon Succubi. The book works, and each roommate gets a powerful lady demon to satisfy their wishes. The main character gets sex. The roommate becomes an imp. The lady demons decide they like the MC so much they're going to make him their new master. This upsets the old master, who demands revenge... but pairing ones' self with demons gains them abilities tied to that emotional bond. Before long Jacob is off to Hell to stake an even greater claim for his two lovers. I didn't hate this book. The writing style and characterizations fit a light hearted action book. Todd, the roommate turned imp, is a bit much, but it works for this story. The main character is just strong enough to move forward in this hero's journey and just bland enough any male reader can imagine they are him. The way the character's dialogue plays off of each other makes sense and can be entertaining. The power system and how it ties to emotion is an interesting twist, the fights are quick yet visceral, and the sex doesn't try to pretend to be anything other than erotic titillation. And yet, that is also this book's biggest crime. It is very by the numbers. It's presentation is fresh but its story feels very "done before." Everything the main character needs to succeed comes to him very conveniently. The main character starts in a town that could be any American Metropolis by the way it is loosely described. The way fights play out are adequately described but play out in exceptionally predictable fashion. The sex scenes are more tell than show, which is going to be a turn off for some, feeling less like an integrated part of the story and more like classic Hustler Readers Letters. All this creates an unusual irony, for me. I don't regret reading this book, but I don't feel compelled to read or listen to more of the books in this franchise (and holy hell, I was surprised to see there's over a dozen of them.) Eric Vall has a solid style that lends itself well to entertaining and exciting but if this story were a movie I'd probably only watch it on Netflix in the background while I was doing something else. It's a snack, not a bite. Audiobook is spot on though, so if given the option if you're interested in the book check it out.
G**E
Very fun story
I enjoyed this series and story. I can't wait to see what the next books adventure is! I found so the characters funny and interesting.
I**3
Fun
Was a fun read, but not exactly what I was expecting. Alot more heaven and he'll fighting when I thought there would be more succubus fun.
A**X
A sexy good read!
This book takes Christian conspiracy theories and brings them to life in this rollercoaster ride of a story. Not only is the magic system well thought out, but it's also interesting and creative. The main character is truly human, flaws and everything. It starts of great, and ends even better. While this is a pulp fantasy book, it has a depth to it that other books lack. A book truly worthy of hundreds of 5-star ratings.
S**N
Entertaining series
I think that some of the reviewers missed the point of these books, which is to entertain. And they do entertain. This isn't a rhetoric on the current state the social or political climate--it's about two guys that summon succubi! There is action, sex, humor, and terribly unrealistic situations. Meaning it is an escape, and it does precisely what the author says it does. No false advertising, no misleading descriptions of the books. My only complaint is that it occasionally turns into food porn--one of the books used the phrase "food coma" on three separate occasions. But the dynamic between the MC and his best friend, not to mention the harem of succubi, feels natural. Pure entertainment!
K**R
Succulent succubi!
I had never read a Eric Vall book before this one but the cover looked interesting & tempting. So I gave it a go & I am glad I did. I confess my knowledge of succubi & demons is hazy, doesn't matter. This is a fun book to read. Loved it. Maybe we all need a couple of succubi in our lives?
T**N
great read, sidekick steals the show!
Warning, possible spoilers ahead! To be fair, the comic relief sidekick, named Todd is the star in this story! The story starts off with Jacob (MC) and Todd summoning two succubae to have some naughty fun. Where Jacob does the obvious by wishing for sexual escapades with his summoned partner, Todd surprises with his wish and the result. The story is fun to read and action-packed, although it has to be said that the MC comes into his powers rather easy and becomes OP pretty fast into the story. However, these little nono's I can overlook because of the entirely hilarious comic relief that is brought to the table by Todd. The image of his little red imp-arm reaching up out of the duffelbag for a fistbump was a ROFLOL-moment! The entire story is brimming with these funny oneliners, remarks and banter from Todd, stealing away the spotlight from the MC. The story-background is interesting (I mean that in a good sense of the word) there's a lot that can be done with this, but since this is book one, let's hope more comes in future releases. For now, we have to do with two succubae, not really a harem or a " Lord of..." kind-of result, but it gets the ball rolling. They're fun and get enough screentime to get a decent fleshed out history each, but i wouldn't cal them devious...maybe a bit watered down version of a devilishly devious demon... As a group though they have quite the road-trippy adventure and work well as a unit. A fun read, a rather original story as well, plenty of spice and a lot of laughs. I will be looking out for book 2!
S**N
Super
I read about one book every two weeks and it is hard to find something that keeps you interested, There some sex but not more then you find in other book of this style.
K**R
Bloody excellent!!
The Imp was freaking hilarious!! Made me wish for a mate like that!! Everything about this book was amazing!!!! Blood brilliant
G**S
Good book.
Although I thought It was good and it moved along, I found I got a bit bored of the story line about halfway through. However give it a try, itโs most blokes fantasy.
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