Paragon - Red Eye VOL.1 light novel harem Kindle Edition

The story starts slow, but the last few chapters are worth it. Multiple plots are woven together, and the author gives both a cliffhanger and a good ending, promising a good start to the next volume.

Ok. So, I totally love the characters. They have decent progressions even if told from the POV of the MC. The story has a somewhat easy flow to follow. And the plot, although close to a lot of other tropes, still managed to set itself apart. And I would very much follow Luca's story now.My only issues like with some part of the writing. Sometimes with conversations between characters, like the ones with Asuka, Aquos, and Luca, it was hard to track who said what. And there are some grammatical things that I saw. Nothing too big and as I said, it's still easy to read.Overall, this is a great and entertaining story. Good job Ly. ☺

Sorry but my review contents spoilersIt is about a half demon half angel guy and a detective angel girl. It has a good story to it. Unsure how in the world they got "ecchi" into the name as I did not notice any. Maybe in the beginning with a girl only in her underwear? That only happened once so might be like a part there to have that genre added kind of thing. There was no "harem" either. 1 guy and 1 girl was the focus. The guy was the half demon half angel and the girl was the angel. The bad guy gets caught in the old. The "school life part seems to be a semi major part as it kinda says he is a school kid a few times but the crimes that are unsolvable are the focus. They are solved at the end.

The tense is all messed up. It takes place currently and past tense at the same time. It makes it really hard to get into the story. I am not going to attempt to read a story like this. You would think a $6 there would be better grammar. I am now going to avoid anything written by this author because of the tense issues.

No romance, no harem. Just talking to a detective to help stop a crime and just talking to one girl in high school does not make this a freaking harem

Let me preface this review by stating a few things. I have read all four books and my review will be a general overview of all 4 not this one specifically. Yes these books do have a few grammatical issues, but none of them impact the understanding of the story whatsoever. I’m assuming the writer is also his own publisher and editor so mistakes like this are bound to happen.Now for the main part of the review. Let’s start with the fact that these are free on kindle unlimited right now, and for a light novel to be on kindle unlimited at all is wildly rare so props to the author for that. As for the plot it’s quite fun it’s a story that is interesting at first but progresses towards a much more intricate story line as the story progresses. By the layer books there are many intriguing plot mysteries and heavy character development that make this book a very enjoyable read. As for content these take about an hour to read and are not very long but that’s what I love about them. I don’t feel like I have to sink an entire day into reading one... even though I binged the first four. The characters are well developed each with rich backstory and the main protagonist is well written. Overall for a free book it’s wildly awesome and even if it wasn’t free I would still recommend it to anyone that likes anime, light novels, manga, etc.

Our hero is a half-breed, able to sense both light and dark magic. This definitely draws him into things he should avoid.This is book one of this series and introduces us to our hero and at least three heroines that I suspect are going to play a larger role down the road. The story reads like a manga without the pictures, same storytelling style, typical Japanese school setting, etc. While I miss the visual appeal of a manga, I enjoyed the narrative style just as well as you get a little bit more of the "inner dialog" if you will. One cautionary note is that the author is not a native English speaker and the writing does have some awkward bits from a grammatical standpoint. If that bothers you, don't read this book. But if you can get past that, the story is rather fun and I, for one, am looking forward to seeing where it leads.Recommended.I received an ARC from the author for review purposes.

So I was going to sit and write a full review on this light novel but as i was writing I couldn’t help but think “Why the hell would I waste even more of my time when I already believe this book wasted 2 hours of my life” so here the short version. I don’t want to sit here and beat the the author up as I’m sure this is a first project as most self published novels are but this project should have written on a website where they could have gotten some real feedback and support from that community because this novel is just plain bad as it is atm. Overall the book reads like a rough draft with no real flow to it all. The plot is as generic as it gets with very little world building. The characters are pretty stereotypical for this style of novel but the real letdown in this area was how the author introduces the characters to the readers with little to no background and the way they chose to describe some of them was just painful to read ex. The first female character the mc meets was described with the very basic hair color eye color and I kid you not as “Model type” what kid of lazy ass description is that. For the tags..ecchi really? The mc sees one girl half undressed and that’s the way it’s described..Harem? Well there are three female characters but that was about as far as that went..Romance? Not even close to any...For the life of me I can’t figure out how this got five stars by so many I could name you 50 bad light novels that are still better than this!!!!