Feminized and Pretty 3: Turned into a submissive sexy girl by his vengeful wife (Femdom and transgender)

"The missing free prequel is an extra free chapter on what happened to Patrick/Patricia between the end of Book 2 and the start of book 3." Bad Idea! Very bad idea!! 2 stars gone already. I paid for books 1,2, & 3 and I don't get the whole story. You have got to be stupid. Oh and I don't have "The Mistress" a prequel chapter for Becoming Joanne series. Maybe that will go in the trash also.It is totally irresponsible to write that a penis piercing "should be OK in a day or so." An idiot to boot. Another star gone.While Patricia repeatly says she can't think of anything worse that could happen to her, the author can't think of a different thing to say and the repetition becomes boring. The book is a smaller size than #2 and #1, but the line spacing has become a full double spacing to make the mook seem longer. Who do you think you are fooling author? So using the author's own phrasing the author's repetitive writing full of hate and revenge leads me to despising her as an uncaring femdom giving the role a horrible image in the non BDSM world, but I also was disgusted at myself as I kept finding the actions depicted as enticing because I knew that in a loving caring relationship they could and would be a wonderful part of a Woman Controlled Relationship. Thankfully this will never see the light of the non BDSM world."Elizabeth's single-minded focus on revenge led me to despising her as a person but I also hated myself for finding her so attractive too. I was in awe of her and I was unable to understand why. This was despite how she talked to me, how she treated me. I was excited by her and I lusted after her. I'd refused to admit that before but it was true. I loved and hated her." (p 153 & 154) That is Patricia thinking about his wife.That gets repeated and I think it is becaause the author doesn't understand why herself.One chapter ends "I swayed and the room went dark" I felt I was at a stage play and not reading a book.The next stage of your transformation will make you so much better. A natural submissive may feel that they are inferior, but that doesn't mean that they are inferior. There is something basic about humanity that the author and apparently much of the world does not understand. It is inherent in Life, Liberty and the Pursuit of Happiness. So Much of thwe world does not seem to agree with that and we are all the less for it. Way too many want the power to control others when that is so totally wrong. The joy and happiness of serving others and being feminine does not exist by itself. The compassionate Mistress is also essential to the relationship. Limits of what is acceptable and what is not does vary between individuals, but the necessity of consent does not. The last 68 pages all seem to argue that the author believes the Mistress is always right and can order anything she desires regardless of who she is: Elizabeth or Elena. Is what Elena desires what the author believes?Yes I know it is fiction, but I am getting closer to where I will go where I know the stories will be much closer to what I like to read and with a new printer I can read them in bed and mark them up however I like with my red ink pens. They are only $2.49 for a package of 10.